Thursday, August 11, 2011

The Beat of the Eggs

This is a poem I wrote sophomore year in a creative writing class I took with the same super awesome English teacher as the AP  English classes I took in my last two years of high school.  We're buds. Anyway, the assignment was to pace the poem with it's context.  Hopefully, you'll get that just from reading it.  This poem was graded as "a super-duper A" and is still one of the creative writing works I am most proud of.

Cold
Fridge door
Cold
Awkward sphere
Carefully,
Carefully,
Tapping it on the counter.
Impatience
Banging it on the counter with a force that could have smashed it to pieces
Tugging to get two separate halves
No shell bits yet
Separate the sun from it's watery horizon
Dripping, 
Slowly,
Oozing,
Shifting the yoke from shell to shell
Then,
Waiting,
Waiting for the drip,
Find the mixer
Feel the power in your hand
A momentary thought of it's true potential
Rushed through my head
Plug it in
Set to four speed
Patience,
Patience.
Rotating the blue bowl,
Cautiously moving the mixer to get all the whites,
As the mixer beats
Whips
Whirls
Fluffs the whites into a cloud

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